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I know how much other people on this board have helped me out when I needed it, so I'm here to return the favor. If you need anything reveiwed I will do it.

I don't know much about but will review:

Poetry
Artwork
Science Fiction

I can review when most others are reluctant:

Scripts
Fan Fiction (I've read almost any common series that I see posted, except Twilight)

Basically, most of the time my reviews aren't that in depth. This thread is the one exception. If you want me to review something and you post it here expect it to be nit picked beyond all belief. Sound good?

I don't ask for anything in return. Of course I love getting feedback on my own stories as much as anyone, but don't feel obligated. Really. The fact that I can help you out like others have helped me is good enough. ('Sides, I get the 50 points I need to post more work)

Anyways, now that that's out of the way... Anyone have something for me to look at? I'll get to it ASAP.

Hey, Cooldude! (It sounds funny, calling someone that, but hey.) If you could, I'd like you to review one of my newer stories, "I Will" in other fiction. It's about Ophelia, from Hamlet, and I'm going to enter it into a magazine, so I'd like it to be in tip-top shape before I submit it. Think you can?

"I Will . . ."

Thanks!

~Sunny

I know it's odd picking a name like cooldude, especially scince I'm a girl. A long, long time ago I picked up one of my brothers ole neopets accounts, and the name just stuck. 'Sides, I can't think of a better one.

Anyways, your story is finished, and edited in depth. I figured if you were planning on submitting it to a newspaper you'd like that, so I didn't ask. Hope that's okay.

Anyone else?

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Thanks!

Finished!

Nice signature by the way.

Anything else?

Anything else?

There's always more!

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It's science fiction and I'm looking for some unbiased critique. Thanks.

Finished! Sorry it took so long, I was a bit busy with school.

Next?

How about topic43618.html

here is a little bit about it!

A childish girl who lives in a childish illusion that the world is loving and death doesn't exist. However, when she moves in with her stepmother everything will change. Simply meaning that a man comes along and bursts her bubble. Come and read the horrifying and disturbing horror/comedy about a girl and her neighbor, a homicidal mass murdering maniac!

Done! Again, I apologize for how long it took... I've been VERY busy lately. If anyone else has something for me to do I would be happy to do it, but you might need to be prepared to wait... Not as long as this last one though.

Neopets!! I miss my neopets...They always died though. Anyways, I'd love for you to take a look at this novel I am working on. I have several chapters already posted, but I need more help with Chapter's four and five. I posted all of them, so that you can kind of update yourself on what is going on, but don't feel like you have to review them all. Thanks!!

Chap. One
Chap. Two
Chap. Two Cont.
Chap. Three
Chap. Three Cont.
Chap. Four (Please Review)
Chap. Five (Please Review)
Chap. Five Cont. (Please Review)

P.S. Can you PM me the link to whatever work you specifically want reviewed? Thanks!!

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