elevation

Hello!

Ooooooooh I really like how you put the different parts in different shades of blue, it fits really well with the "drowning" parts =D
Ngl I'm really bad at reviewing poems, so I hope you will not want to run away screaming after you read this... XD
The first "sentence" kind of - not really a sentence - hm - sentence piece? - whatever!
"i'm drowning
in all these disapproving looks" I find really cool, because it somehow gives me flow vibes if you know what I mean, that fit really well with the drowning; and it's also just a good sentence - sentence piece - half sentence - idk - to start with, I think.
The beginings of each of the parts is also really well done: either you thought about it a lot, or you just have an instinct for it I guess! The first and last go "I'm drowning" and the middle one goes "I see you"; same amount of syllables! It really makes the poem sound good.
Oooh and each of the parts also has it's own kind of "theme" I think:

First one: 'me' - centered around the narrator, thoughts eating them away et cetera
Second, middle one: 'you' - I see you, please don't leave me, etc.
Third, last one: 'both/us' - I'm drowning, but you're there, etc.

I find that really cool too!
This looks like you put so much thought and energy into it, with every little detail, and it turned out really really good; so please keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!! And thank you for sharing this
Have a wonderful day!

-HMMHhehe the potato