Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm Knight Hardy here on a mission to ensure that all works on YWS has at least two reviews. You will probably never see this but....Imma do this anyway.
First Impression: Hmm...so this one seemed kind of like just random words here. I really could not detect even a hint of an actual plot behind this in anything except for one line that sort of ties some things together and shows maybe just a little bit of something but for the most part this was just a random scene that seemed like an excerpt from a book.
Anyway let's get right to it,
Matt seemed anxious.
“Sonny you fucking cunt! I haven’t seen you in for ever!” Matt yelled at his former band mate.
“I’ve missed you too bitch.”
Well that is a very interesting way to greet someone that you haven't seen in a very long time. Definitley grabs attention but at the same time seems pretty harsh as a way to just greet someone.
Matt leaned in closer to Sonny. He pressed his lips against Sonny and backed him into the closed front door. Sonny didn’t bother resisting Matt. He slid his hands down to Matt’s hips. He felt his belt. Matt’s tongue stopped moving inside Sonny’s mouth. He bit Sonny’s lip.
Sonny grunted a bit. He fidgeted with Matt’s belt buckle.
Well I guess things are certainly getting straight to the point. There is definitely no mystery as to the lack of comments on this particular piece. This is just going straight into very much R Rated territory.
Sonny hated being everyone’s bitch. He had to suck everyone off and never had the favor returned.
Well this is the only line in here that feels like it has anything to do with a plot. This is a pretty interesting observation to put in there and we can definitely get a sense of how maybe Sonny is someone that is taken for granted and perhaps treated very badly which is an interesting story arc to go with.
For one thing, that could have been the best head Matt had ever gotten, but that little bitch choked.
Well that definitely characterizes Matt very well.
And yaa not a lot to be saying about this piece. It really had absolutely no actual plot and like just the one line that could maybe convey some kind of actual story.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall like I said I didn't see to much of anything in here. Sorry if I was being harsh its just that I couldn't find much else to say after reading this. So yaa that's about all I have to say here.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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