Published March 13, 2011
The birds chirp above my head,
Singing songs for all to hear,
Flying across the orange sky,
A 'V' formation way up high,
Flying beautys slice the air,
Ever so slowly and ever so lightly,
The gliding figures swoop in the air,
Then before they know it they are gone,
The wondrous show at the crack of dawn,
The birds have little reason to know,
That in fact they are the show
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Very cute poem! I liked the story, and I really loved the ending. I thought it really tied everything together. Great work!
It should be spelt: beautiesTheres only one grammatical error that I found:
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But Overall Just Great. I Live Near The Beach So I Can See It In My Head With Seagulls As The Birds.
~Xiahou Zay