Published June 1, 2007
Elsie's mad hair today became a sladder patter.
With her ears and her eyes she could simply revise that her hair was madder today.
But my way is sweeter then breaking a comb it's taking a shower today I hope!
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This is rather confusing. Sorry. But yes, where's a mod?
This is a poem, darling. Belongs in the poetry secton.
*waits for a mod to move it*
Before I can really comment you need to write a lot more...