Elsie's Mad Hair

by winie603
  • June 1, 2007
  • Poetry
  • Other

Elsie's mad hair today became a sladder patter.

With her ears and her eyes she could simply revise that her hair was madder today.

But my way is sweeter then breaking a comb it's taking a shower today I hope!

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Twit
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Twit commented · Fri Jun 01, 2007 8:10 pm

This is rather confusing. Sorry. But yes, where's a mod?

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Teague
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Teague commented · Fri Jun 01, 2007 4:25 pm

This is a poem, darling. Belongs in the poetry secton. :)

*waits for a mod to move it*

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Rydia
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Rydia commented · Fri Jun 01, 2007 2:43 pm

Before I can really comment you need to write a lot more...



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