I sat across the room and a analyzed you
And that's when it came through
I liked you not very little but not too much
Just more than enough
Everytime you would speak to me i would act tough and put a smile
Not small to make it seem like I didn't care not too big either
I made it just perfect
Then I asked God about you
If you truly were mine
Was it the right time
All these questions lined up
In my prayer about you
Asking God for a sign if you would decline but who knew
A text changed my fate
Something I couldn't debate
Your answer a hard no
Crushed my heart
It's shows
But i did ask God for a sign
But this was not what I desired
From someone who i truly admired
This all backfired
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Hello there .
First of all , WELCOME TO YWS!!!!
Second, this poem is very relatable, I loved it, so let me see
Yep, one year ago I had a crush as well, and when I confessed to him, he told me that he didn't like me. But the problem is that it was a big deal for me. I soon thought that I was ugly , and that's why he did'nt like me. Tbh, I don't even know why I even liked that guy.
Hope that this was helpful
Much love
Queenie❤️