I was about to say Fand was being a little harsh with her comments, but that was before I read the poem. What you have here is not actual poetry, it is a series of wrongly punctuated statements about what people do. There are spelling mistakes. Think about what you're actually trying to do in a poem before you write it, spell-check it, edit it, and take your work seriously if you post it here or otherwise, readers - me included - won't care for it.
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