Hello! Forever here for a short review!!!
It was a wonderful and a great read! I don't have words to express my feelings. I really like reading short poems. Life is sorrowful... I have a question– why didn't u use caps? Was it intentional? If yes, then also I think u should capitalize the i in the last line. And you should use punctuation marks.
Overall, a very good poem! Keep writing!
~Forever
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