Young Writers Society

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),

Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!

Anyway let's get right to it,

Once,there was a young,seventeen year old girl named Nova,who just didn't like clowns.

Why,you ask?

When she was eight years old,she was at a friend's birthday party,where they had invited a clown.She didn't care yet,but her friend's older sister was playing a movie with a scary clown in it and Nova just so happened to watch the movie with her.

When the clown finally came to the birthday party,you can bet Nova's reaction was a frightful one.

It didn't stop there.

At ten,her friends wanted her to go with them to a haunted house attraction for Halloween.

They had a clown jump-scaring them.

Being ten,Nova thought it was all real and cried her eyes out.

It's still not over.

When Nova was thirteen,her friends dared her to say:"Clown come get me" five times at 3:00 A.M. on Halloween.Nova did and a clown chased her.

The clown in question was actually another teen her friends got to dress as a clown and chase her.

Even though it was a "harmless prank", Nova still despised all clowns.That's all there was to it.

Hey again!

I like coming across characters in your stories where I've already seen them crop up in another. I remembered Nova as the babysitter of the girls whose parents were turned into clowns? I think that's right as there have been so many characters!

This links well into the story where the family became clowns. I assume you've set it up that Nova doesn't like clowns because she's going to come into contact with the family (if she hasn't already, I can't quite remember where we left the last story).

The fear she has certainly seems justified, though I'd like to see more of when she was chased at 13 so I feel like I'm experiencing the fear with her.

I always like when you include the image of the character at the end of the post, so thanks for sharing!

Icy

Hey! Forever here with a review!!

This was interesting. The life of Nova seems to be kind of a morally tragic one when it comes to the clowns. Like without the clowns, her life appears to be pretty good. Oh yes, you don't really know though that what what other difficulties Nova had in her life. Maybe she had other difficulties too. We don't know that but I would like to know.

One thing which I wonder about is the maturity of Nova. From what it seems to me, Nova's friends are more mature than her. Like they were the people who dared her, so maybe they weren't that afraid. However, it's a pity that they couldn't understand the consequences of their actions. Like it kind of inculcated trauma about clowns and an unknown fear about the same in Nova's mind.

I just had a question. The clown Nova saw in the movies... Was that the same clown that came on her birthday? Just a bit interested. Hopefully, Nova will be able to get over all these very soon. I actually don't understand why Nova did all these but as she did, she will have to tolerate the consequences. Nova's friends do not appear to be very harmless.

Overall, the story intrigues me about Nova's future. Like what connection will she have with the story? What role will she play in the story? What will be the significance of her fear of clowns.... A lot of questions.

Keep Writing!!

~Forever