Hello Again, My Friend!
It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review this short story using my Familiar method today! Ellie recommended it recently, and remembering that I've skimmed this one before, I thought I'd finish the job and leave a review! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh heh…
What The Black Eyes See...
In another awesome take on Laughing Jack and his twisted ways, we get to hear the personal account of the older sibling of a victim, and the horrors he was forced to witness on one terrible night. Let's get into the details though.
Where The Dagger Points...
I have no recommendations to make for this story! This was awesome!
Why The Grin Widened...
First, I love how this story opened up:
People usually associate nursery rhymes as being happy-go-lucky meaningless songs for children. That’s how I used to look at them, a long time ago.
That all changed when my little sister, Tina, started talking about her “imaginary friend”.
Right off the bat, you know something is amiss; imaginary friends in a horror story always mean trouble, and already knowing this story relates to Laughing Jack, there's just something unnerving about the thought of nursery rhymes and childhood games.
Describing the slow progression, from humming odd tunes, to eerie black and red scribbles, and odd voices in Tina's room, to full-blown night terrors. And the fact that is escalated to this point so fast...
She would wake up in the middle of the night and sleep in my room. I asked her why she did it and she just said “Laughing Jack will kill me if I sleep in my room.”
Very cool way to show the method of hunting for this demonic clown; a slow lure through fun facades, only to snap when the victim is least expecting it. And knowing this is a young child, and this is only an "imaginary friend," you just know something terrible is going to happen, so you're kinda reading through a cringe, haha.
Oooo, the scene with Tiny "facing her fears" was written SOOO good!! I love that peaceful staging with the narrator in their room, not suspecting anything, only for that gradual ramping up of creepiness to come back; a creaky old nursery rhyme, followed by that eerie laughter, and thundering footsteps. Ah, and the rush to do something, it had me at the edge of my seat!
I saw my parents sleeping through their open door. They looked like they were in a nightmare with how they tossed and turned, but they didn’t wake up until it was too late.
This, and the fact that the door was locked despite not even having locks was a good addition to show the extent of Laughing Jack's abilities -he has fully trapped Tina, and is going in for the kill.
I love how you describe Laughing Jack, like this here:
I saw candy and bits of flesh in them too. I don’t know if I imagined it, but I thought I saw maggots in there as well.
Oooo, nasty!! Love it!! And the descriptions of Tina's death are so brutal and chilling, the way she was disemboweled so thoroughly and pinned up like a trophy. Absolutely morbid and terrifying, peak horror. This is why I love the Laughing Jack stories when I'm looking to be creeped out! >:D
I need help.
Tina is right next to me as I write this. She’s crying, like she always does.
She needs help.
Is there anything anybody can do?
Oh, and Tina's ghost still haunts him!! What an incredible and grim way to end this gloriously gruesome story!
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Overall, that story was as awesome as I remembered! I'm glad I was able to come back and leave a full review. Nicely done!
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