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Keep Your Eyes Peeled - My Interpretation
This chapter contained a lot of things that made Crybaby think. She comes home and looks for her brother, mother, and LJ, but the house is eerily empty. As she watches the TV, she begins to question people’s perception of her and how she would be viewed differently if she was similar to the “perfect” women on TV. It also makes the reader think about how people act and the standards that women face to stay pretty and likable.
It's The Tot That Counts - Some Advice
I think you could describe the mood of the chapter a little more here. The house is completely empty and the black and white TV is playing in the background. That is a spooky and horror movie-like mood to me, and I think you can develop it more so that the reader can feel how quiet and lonely the house is, and how that relates to how Crybaby feels.
That's Absolutely Mashing - My Favorites
I’ve got to say, this is probably my favorite chapter in this series. The problem that Crybaby thinks about in this chapter is very real, and probably relatable for most people. It’s interesting how you incorporated this into the story based off the song too. It tells us a lot about Crybaby and that she has insecurities about these kinds of things.
Time Fries When You're Having Fun - Final Words
I actually really enjoyed reading this chapter, I think it was really thoughtful and well written, even though it was so short. Also I realized that this review template is perfect for this chapter because it’s about Mrs. Potato Head.
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