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Angelic Demon

by vampricone6783

*I have Gacha Club character designs on my wall. I hope that you all enjoy this story I made. :)

Chapter One

Once upon a time,there was a beautiful angel, who had long red hair and black inky eyes. Her name was Celestria and she was an angel from Heaven. She was only sixteen years old. She had an older and strict (but protective) sister named Evangeline.

Celestria had an ideal life.

But it wasn't the life that she wanted.

Every year, when an angel turned sixteen, there was a ceremony. A ceremony where an angel had the chance to become God's messenger angel. The angel would send messages to God from Earth. The messages would be Prayers.

Pretty boring, right? If an angel didn't get chosen in a ceremony, they would do janitor work and clean the halls of Heaven. (How else can Heaven stay clean?)

Evangeline was God's messenger angel and she believed that it was Celestria's turn now to take up the wing.

"Celestria, fix your hair. You have to look nice if you want to get chosen." She said.

Celestria rolled her eyes. Who cared about "looking nice"? Only a perfect angel would.

Being a perfect angel was boring.

Chapter Two

She decided that she should take a break from all of this preparation and hang out in her ro-

My, my. 

Celestria couldn’t believe her eyes.

There was her sister, her perfect sister, suspiciously stuffing letters in her drawer.

"Evangeline, what are you doing?" She asked.

Evangeline blushed.

"Nothing." She blurted. This was so unlike her.

Celestria raised an eyebrow at her.

"Are you not telling me something?" She asked.

Evangeline gulped and accidentally dropped the letters she was holding. Celstria read one:

Dear Celestria,

You're such a wonderful angel and I have heard so much about you. My name is (you're going to have to find out on your own) and I am a demon from Hell. You will probably never see this letter, but I would really like to get to know you.

-Your shadow admiring you from afar.

There were a million more like it. It appeared that this shadow person heard about her and wanted to talk to her. Evangeline hid the letters from her!

"Why did you hide these from me?!" She asked.

"Because it's against the law for a demon and angel to be together, even to talk!" She yelled.

"What law? That ridiculous thing God said? That's not a fair law and I really want to see this person." Celestria said.

"This is outrageous! You don't even know who is giving you the letters!" She yelled.

"Exactly. This is because you were keeping them from me. I'm going to Hell and I'm going to talk to this demon." Celestria said.

"NO! Today is the day you do the ceremony for being God's message angel..."

But Celestria wasn't listening. She jumped in a portal to Hell.

"Ugh! This is terrible..." Evangeline weakly trailed off.

Chapter Three

Celestria flew down...down....all the Hell.

Yes, it was a burning pit of flames and demons, but it looked a lot more exciting than it did in Heaven.

The demons around her were all big and red, with long black horns and yellow eyes, their tails were all short and pointy. They all looked like demons from fairytales.

But then a claw tapped her shoulder and she turned around.

This one was different. He was around her age and very pale and white. His hair was thick and white. His eyes were a bloody red and his nails were so long that it would rival with any teenage girl's nails. He wore a long black coat like he was hiding something and when he opened his mouth to speak, he had sharp teeth and a long, gray tongue.

He was rather handsome for a demon...

"Oh hi. You must be Celestria the angel. You're more beautiful than I could ever imagine. Allow me to make my humble acquaintance. My name is Draven."

His voice was so beautiful that it made her want to scream!

She took his hand and they walked in Hell together. It wasn't so bad when she held Draven's hand.

"How do you know about me?" She asked him.

"Oh, I hate it here. Soooo, I just listen to you angels in Heaven whenever I can and I saw you. I really liked you and wanted to talk to you in person..." Draven trailed off.

"So then I wrote you letters. Why didn't you answer them?" He asked her.

"Why did you spy on me?" She asked playfully. She wasn't mad at him, she knew how he felt.

"Uhh...sorry about that, I didn't think. Um..why didn't you answer my letters?" He repeated.

"Oh sorry, that wasn't me. My older sister hid them from me. She didn't want me around you. Sometimes, I think she's too caring. Do you have any older siblings?" She asked.

"No, it's just me. Hey, do you like being an angel? I hate being a demon. You're expected to be all rage and wrath and want to destroy the world and stuff. I don't want to stay here. I want to go to Heaven, it seems like such a nice and accepting paradise." Draven said.

"Sorry Draven, but it's the exact same story in Heaven. They expect you to be a sweet angel who wants to help everybody no matter what. If you don't meet their standards, then it's janitor work for you! Hey, can I ask you something?" She asked.

"Yes." He said.

"Why does everyone want us to meet other people's expectations?!" She yelled.

"I know, right?! It's so stupid!" Draven yelled. They talked for hours. She grew to like the demon boy and he felt the same for her.

Suddenly, a very angry voice huffed:


"Oh no, it's you." She sighed.

Chapter Four

Evangeline was standing in Hell with her hands on her hips. She shook her head at Celestria.

"You're coming with me!" She yelled. Evangeline grabbed her hand, but Celestria was prepared.

"NO I'M NOT!" She kicked her leg and ran away with Draven, but Evangeline was fast and dragged her back to Heaven.

When they were back home, Evangeline took her to their bedroom and she plopped her on a bed.

"You shouldn't have done that, Celestria. Draven could have hurt could have been hurt...don't do that again...blah blah blah..." Evangeline was rambling on and on again.

"I'M NOT FOUR YEARS OLD, EVANGELINE! I'M FREAKING SIXTEEN YEARS OLD, I CAN MAKE MY OWN DECISIONS!" Celestria snapped. She couldn't take it anymore. She seriously couldn't.

Evangeline was speechless for the first time.


"He could have-" Evangeline was saying.

"Don't." Celestria said. She walked off without a word.

Chapter Five

Celestria jumped into the portal to Hell to see Draven. They talked for hours and hours.

But Celestria had a question.

"Why do you wear such a long coat? What are you hiding?"

Draven shrugged.

"I don't know. I just feel better with it." He said, looking far off into the fires.

Celestria held his hand.

He didn't need to tell her. If he wanted, she would let him be silent.

She knew how he felt.

Chapter Six

Celestria went back home, her sister wasn't there.

Celestria thought for a while. Did she really want to stay here? Did Draven want to be in Hell? Could they...

But they couldn't possibly run away together. No matter how much she loved him, she couldn't abandon her sister, but then, why would she care now if she hadn't cared before? Celestria was sixteen, after all. She could make her own decisions!

Celestria sighed.

She knew exactly what she wanted.

Celestria went back home, her sister wasn't there.

Celestria thought for a while. Did she really want to stay here? Did Draven want to be in Hell? Could they...

But they couldn't possibly run away together. No matter how much she loved him, she couldn't abandon her sister, but then, why would she care now if she hadn't cared before? Celestria was sixteen, after all. She could make her own decisions!

Celestria sighed.

She knew exactly what she wanted.

Chapter Seven

"Evangeline, I have something to tell you." She said bravely.

"What?" Evangeline asked.

"I'm going to see the world with Draven." She said.

"WHAT?!" She screamed.

"What's wrong? It's not like he's going to hurt me!" She yelled.


But Celestria wouldn't have it.

"I'm not a little girl anymore, Evangeline! I can make my own decisions and I want to be with Draven!" She yelled.

"Fine. If that's what you want. You want to leave faster? I know a way..." Evangeline sneered.

She then dragged Celestria to the Hall of God to discuss the problem.

Chapter Eight

They were in a marble hall of angel statues and ceiling paintings. This hall was the hall of God.

No one knew what gender God was or if God was even a living thing. God was just there. God was a divine light. Any angel that had a problem would answer to God.

"God, we have a problem!" Evangeline screamed.

"What?" God asked.

"My sister wants to be with a demon and go around the world with him! Please get some reason in her head!" Evangeline screamed.

God did not say anything.

"Hear me out, God. I love him! He loves me! She's keeping me away from him because we're different, he grows through the same things I go through down there. Everyone has unfair expectations for the both of us. Please, just let us love." Celestria pleaded.

"She can't go with him! He's vile and evil and-" Evangeline was interrupted.

"NO HE'S NOT! I LOVE HIM!" Celestria screamed.

God thought for a moment. Then it said:

"Celestria, come here."

She obeyed.

"You have violated every law in the Bible. You will now suffer." God said unforgivingly.

People have a common misconception that God is forgiving and perfect.

Evangeline did not say anything.In her eyes, Celestria was getting what she "deserved." Celestria, however, was crying. All she asked for was to be with her love!

"What will you do to me?" She asked.

"Your angelic powers shall be stripped from your soul." God said.

When an angel gets stripped of their powers, it hurts like never before.

And just like that, it made her wings no more.

Celestria screamed in pain.

Then, it used its powers to get rid of her immortality.

Now, she was a bleeding mortal.

God sent her down, down, all the way to the fiery pits of Hell.

Chapter Nine

Celestria raised her tear stained eyes to look at the burning inferno that Draven called home.

Speaking of Draven, Celestria heard him scream in pain. It appeared that the demons found out and were trying to kill him.

Celestria stiffened. Maybe she couldn't save herself, but she could try to save him.

"LET HIM GO!" She screamed at the angry mob.

"Why would we do that?!" They yelled at her.

"Because he did nothing wrong. He loved me and I love him .Love is not a crime. Love is a beautiful and magical force more powerful than we can ever imagine. Love is Love. We love each other, so let him go. Let us be together." She said.

They thought for a moment. Then they said:

"You want us to let him go? Okay, then we'll let him go!"

The demons held her back with their hands. They were keeping her from Draven.

Celestria fought hard, but they were stronger than her. She watched in pain as Draven was stripped of his immortality and demon powers.

They were cast away to Earth as their punishment.

They would stay there until they died.

Chapter Ten

They were lying in a human bed together. They were in a human apartment. Would this be their new life?

“Okay...So we’re angels. No demons. Just human. I can’t believe they cast us away like that!” She yelled.

"At least we have each other." He said.

She smiled.

"Yes, no matter what we are or where we are, we will always have each other and that's all that matters." Celestria said.

They kissed passionately and their legs intertwined.

They would always have each other, no matter what.

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