Published September 5, 2010
I started writing this story about 12 months ago, and i haven't actually written any more on this for about 10 months. 
I understand that it's quite long so I'm sorry for that.
Cheers. 
P.S: Please don't edit, just give me your views and comments on it.
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From what I read, I like it, but I didn't read all of it. No one has that kind of time for one sitting. If you are going to post something of this length, post it in the novel's section, or break it up into chapters and post those one at a time.
I have to admit, it is a bit daunting to click your link, and see how small the scroll bar gets.
Just trying to help.
Sailor.