Listen to Claw and Colly. I do, and I'm a better poet for it.
I just thought I'd add this:
Google wrote:Results 1 - 10 of about 153,000 for "Life is a battery". (0.20 seconds)
Try to push the limits of metaphors. As you can see, the one you're currently working with has been used before.
Economically Yours,
~Ed
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