Hi guys. This is my second song...my first one sucked and I think got like 1 or 2 reviews. oh well. I'm not sure if this is any better. Its kinda sad. I don't know why I write sad songs.
Looking down
Such a far far way to go
To stable ground, yeah
My world, I left
I’m going to jump
But I don’t know if I can do it
By myself
Chorus: I’m looking for a push
A push that will take me far from here
I’m sick of tears
I’m sick of pain
I’m sick of suffering again
Someone take me away
From here
Standing alone
This is a choice I have to make
Though, I’ve been shown
That I’ll never amount to anything
So, why do I think I can do this?
Chorus
I’m feeling
Something down inside
I’m feeling
Something down inside
Something I cannot see
Though, I believe It can deliver me
Chorus
Deliver me (x3 whispering)
Yep, its weird all right.
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Tcspyder. Her's does NOT suck, it needs improment but I liked it.
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