Wrong

Hey there!

As much as I liked some of these lines I feel that you need to scrub up a bit in terms of your portrayal, perhaps spice up the vocab or describe a little more, so there's probably room for elaboration. Another improvement I can suggest is that you install some kind of simple punctuation scheme, such as sticking commas at the end or places where you think I should take a breather when I'm reading. If you do this the fluency and pace becomes a lot more admirable and not only is it easier to read, it also packs a bigger affect, so perhaps a good revision of this.

Keep it up!
Ben

Hi! I liek your poem but I think it's a little vague. And it's good to leave your poem open to interpretation so that the reader can assume whatever they like from it and relate it to themselves, but I don't think there is quite enough here for the reader, or me, at least, to really get something from the poem. I think you need maybe some more description, just something to make it a bit more specific - what regrets, what did the person do, etc. Also, I don't know what you mean by "he've". So a good start, I just think it needs to be more detailed.

I think your poems a little short. I have a number of suggestions for you.
First...

The hope that is put
In somebody that regrets