Elemental Cycle: Volume 1- Fireborn
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I'm removing this piece because I'm getting ready to show the first chapters to a publisher to see if they are interested.
My thanks to those who took the time to read and/or review Elemental Cycle- Fireborn. I know I only posted the first draft of chapter one but it was still a huge help. And if you want to find out how the story ends... well, you'll just have to buy the book.
Wish me luck. Fingers crossed. Here's hoping my dream comes true.
Sylverdawn
Hey they Sylver, I'm back for the 3rd part!
toowas that something he said out loud? If yes, it's really weird to have him say that. If not, if it's a thought, it should be in italics.
Again, her thoughts should be in italics.
Well, Sylver, those were the nitpicks I had. I thought this was quite brilliant! You threw us into the action rapidly and you've obviously got a good grasp on your characters and this world you've created. I really enjoyed reading this.
Please let me know when you post more?
Tanya