feeling of writing, feeling of heart on thesis
like whale waving in the ocean she is
we lose the life some day without know who were Wei
but we loose the feelings, thoughts in the world of stupid before die
god gave envelop of gift in mind of all secrets of life
form of a envelope with a lock of thinking beyond life
knowledge rein everywhere everywhere no one to grasp
oration, writing on thesis no one know joy of knowledge
where we our thoughts brought us in life
where we will our thoughts take us in life
the joy of writing like joy of something
break barriers of impossibility enhance the joy of writing.
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Hello there. I see you're new. :D You might want to go and review some other members' works; not only are people more likely to want to review you, but you'll also get points for reviewing which you can use for things around the site (like sending virtual gifts and posting works).
I realize that English probably isn't your first language, but a using bit more caution in your writing is a good idea. There were a number of missing, misspelled, and misused words in this poem, and it made it hard to understand. Using dictionaries is a great way to make sure you're using words right (my favorite is Dictionary.com), and there are a lot of excellent grammar sites on the internet (like The Writing Lab at Purdue).
Everything aside, though, I still enjoyed this poem. I really felt your love of writing and the joy it gives you while I was reading it. :D Fixing the missing/misspelled/misused words and maybe adding some punctuation would make this poem even more enjoyable.
If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. I'll be more than happy to help. :D