Published May 12, 2007
Three years was long enough.
Was long enough for me.
Cause I had it
up to here. I couldn't wait to
be free.
Because I got sick of your lies
and tired of you always
always laughin' at me.
But now I can say. I don't have to listen to you anymore.
Cause I don't have to hear what you have to say.
Yeah I am finally free of all of you.
Oh what a happy day.
I ain't dwelling in the past no.
This girl has moved on.
I don't wish for anything bad to happen to you.
I'm just telling my story, that's all.
Everyone is special.
That is true.
Everyone deserves to be free.
From people around the world to me and you.
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It was very exspresive. I didn't really like the first verse, though.
There is a very good point here. I like the way you described it. Maybe you should probably find another way to show you are really serious about certain parts then repeating it in my opinion.
I really liked it though it shows a lot of feeling and that was a good piece.
*moved to Lyrics*
I think you meant to post this (And the others you posted) in the Lyrics Section. "Lyric poetry expresses the wishes, the hopes, the joys, and the sorrows of the author." It's not song lyrics.