Oh NO, this is the end of the story, isn't it?
That was way too short, bro.
Megan is so clueless.
Which I guess is the point. But still.
Real quick, there's this.
The dancing, willowy nymph next to her was now a hulking, beetle-browed brute sliding her a sexy drink and stuffing empty capsules in his pocket.
I have since come to assume that Megan is thinking figuratively here, but at first I thought she was speaking literally, so I was a bit confused. "Wait, weren't they outside talking?" It sounded momentarily as if they'd actually gone to a bar to talk or something. Just something to consider, although I wouldn't worry about it so much unless other readers mention it.
I like that both girls get a final say in this part and let us know their final thoughts of the other, although I'd like to know what the "seditious sarcasm" was that Megan whispered to Kathryn so long ago.
I also love that Megan thinks "non-Mormons are gonna lump me in with them...these stereotypes are so unfair." It seems awfully ironic for someone who spent the last few parts of the story worried about a non-Mormon's immortal soul and talking about how immoral various things are.
Right, so also I just realized that I missed the first chapter of this because it wasn't in the Green Room, which is where I went for all my reviews. But since I enjoyed this so much, I'm now going to head back to the first chapter and see if I have anything remotely useful to say about that.
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