Well done @silverquill12 !
This is Mahira. I am here for reviewing your poem.
It's a great piece of work. Something that is quite relatable at this point of time.
My favorite lines from the poem are
"I can hear the birds.
I never noticed how they chirp.
They are much softer than the ones on Twitter."
The way these lines reflect the rude tone of humans even while operating social media sites is quite true.
Secondly, their comparison with the soft chirp of birds is beautiful.
Altogether it's a lovely poem . So well done. Best of luck for the future.
Best wishes
Mahira
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