silverSUNLIGHTx wrote:Screams that could pierce any heart
Float toward the blackened heavens
Chaos
The civilized world
Gone under
Plunged into eternal night
Yikes. It's a good start, compelling and frightening, but I still had to say "Yikes".
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silverSUNLIGHTx wrote:Where there are no happy endings
Nothing else exists
Chivalry dissolved
Courtesy derailed
Black
Frozen
Icicles
Waters tremble with human fright
Death lurking
Beneath the surface
Stealing every life possible
In its icy grip
Not realistic, but interesting. Good work.
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