Hi there. I loved your poem. it's amazing in a strange way and I don't know how to explain it but I think it's awesome. ' A tear falls a sign' umm....did you forget to put a word there or is it just that .... it just feels in complete to me. In a masquerade you wear a mask right? Okay this is one of those poems that could have a lot of meanings.'I'm trapped and burning yet cold as ice' Hey! I loved that line.'Don't "try" just care it's the real you I need' Well is this girl talking to herself[her true self] or is it something else anyway what I understood is life is a stage like Shakespeare said and people are actors well we all put on a mask hiding our true self and we get lost in search of our true self and we loose everything dear to us in the race. Well kee up the good work.
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