i've been told wrong way too much
i think i've heard just enough
its all sad
all bad
i might as well just give the f*** up
because i cant help but to know
chorus
you told me every lie
stupid dirty lies
lies that i never really denied
you told little secrets
that i could believe
but too bad
your talk is cheap
i tried to trust alot of people
those people all stood me up
never thought i'd say this
but i never really caredenough
i really could of startred out fresh
but now its just too late
everything i have to do myself
now i have way too many complains
chorus
i just drown in
every sentence
i admit i'm guilible
cant help but scream it
cant help but scream it
chorus
i'm dont know how to trust antmore
i cant help but drown in your word
your way to sly i cant never see those lies in your eyes want to breathe again
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thnx. That really means alot. =]
You're a doll.
Absolutely wonderful.
I'll tell you what, I could never write like this when I was thirteen. (And thirteen is not so young...) This had real passion, and flair. I imagine you'll end up being one of those really great musicians when you grow up like Conor Oberst who started out young.
Keep listening to music and studying your craft. Keep feeling everything as an artist. You're songs will turn out great.
awesome idead though i dont know if i wanna take it since i'm trying to keep my lyrics original, thanx though.
REALLY REALLY GOOD; I hope you sing it with a special melody
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stupid dirty lies
lies that i never really denied
That doesn't flow at all.
stupid dirty lies
how you lied, how you lied
lies that i never denied
If only I died
....
Otheriwse, good!
it's good. i'm not really the best judge of lyrics, though!!