i never saw it coming
it just came right through I never got a warning
so quit complaining
that your situations
are not fair
just look at me
(just look at me)
chorus
why can't you just see
what i need
i just want to leave everything
everything behind
erase every bad memories off my mind
why can you just seee
what i really want in life
i cant stay the same
no one stays the same
have you ever wondered
what it would be like with out your perfec tlife
cant you fell it coming
well you always get your warnings
unlike me
(unlike me)
(chorus)
you get every single thing
now you say this isn't what you wanted
(this isn'twhat you wanted)
(chorus)
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typos i'll fix it
First off; don't post so many pieces in one section at once. It deters people from reading.
Second off, I can't even get through this as it's riddled with basic errors. Spelling...grammar...putting spaces in between your words... these are all good things