Hai Screamingsloth,
Wonderful, just wonderful!!! I absolutely love the romance. I love that you are able to create such a clear picture of what's going on. There are some moments in this poem that lack detail but that is a very common problem so, you're not alone. So far I love the structure it's nice and organized. I can tell that as a writer you have some really lit skills. A lot of people in this world wouldn't have been able to explain moments in this poem so deep if they haven't felt it. To be honest I don't think anyone would. My point is you have a very rare talent and to excel is to keep on going and adding more and more into your poems so they really come to life. Your a great writer I would love to see more!!! Keep Writing poetry!
Nidkits
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