Published May 10, 2009
Look at her what a tease
Why don't you just stop judging me?
I just can't take it the walls are caving in.
I am just trying, trying to fit in.
I'm just like anyone of you.
And if you don't stop I'm going to,
Go crazy, What a plan.
I'm my only, one single fan!
pressure, pressure, building, building
You're getting in my head. you're getting in my head.
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Get out! Get out of my head.
Leave me alone.
Get Out! can't you see?
The pressures breaking, breaking me.
GET OUT!
My hands are shaking is there a cure?
For this big black hole deep in my heart.
Is life a joke? I don't know.
I need an answer. I have to be sure!
All the insults they're getting to me.
I need to get away. I need to flee.
Be quiet. Just shut-up!
My life is running, running out of luck.
Pressure, pressure, building, building
You're getting in my head, you're getting in my head
Get out! get out of my head.
Leave me alone.
Get out! can't you see?
The pressures breaking, breaking me?
GET OUT!
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The first line seems to be in disjunct with the rest of the song. As with any piece of writing, the beginning introduces it. At the first line it seems to be about the way you dress or act, but it's really about the way people act and judge in general. Unless you are going to elaborate on that first line, I would open with something else. That way each verse will follow a theme. Just write a whole verse on the "tease" thing, or take it out and change your introductory line. Other than that, I really like this song.
i love your lyrics. they rock.
Hello!
This song shows known for all of us state, when it seems, that ''life is running, running out of luck''. Many people went through this feelings. This song also makes those people, who judge other people, who judge, but have the same drawbacks, which they judge, look at themselves.
Good.
Continue in this way.
Antonina.