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Crazy Kay

by plutogirl


This is just a silly poem but anyways enjoy :D



crazy kay has gone away.

whereto does crazy kay go?

over that hill she goes.

bad terrible crazy kay

to go away!
she goes away.

over that way.
to return on some other time.

she goes to the city of thyme.
crazy kay

to collect this
terrible ryme

crazy kay where have you gone?
to return in due time.

will she return on her goose?
or will she return as a moose?

A sad sad day it is.
crazy kay did not come as goose or moose

but her stone here does say
"here be crazy kay"

"she was killed this day"
by crazy me

"crazy kay died of laughing"
she just couldn't stop laughing

good bye good bye crazy kay
we'll remember you with a smile

as proof of laughter's guile.


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Fri Feb 10, 2006 7:40 pm
plutogirl says...



thanks kay glad you find it funny since you were my inspiration lol :lol:




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Fri Feb 10, 2006 3:27 pm
Kay Kay wrote a review...



The poem was about me! LOL it's funny Meagan. Like I told you before I'm not going to crit it because it won't be as funny that way. Besides I'd probably tear it apart. I think I need to write one about you now. LOL :)




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Thu Feb 09, 2006 7:30 pm
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glad you two enjoyed it, and nope i wasn't talking about you :wink: it was someone else




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Tue Feb 07, 2006 10:17 pm
xanthan gum says...



the ending was actually sort of interesting, though all in all i'm pretty sure this poem was 99% ridiculous. a wonderful waste of space. i congratulate you!




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Tue Feb 07, 2006 10:05 pm
-KayJuran- wrote a review...



aaaaagggggghhhhhhh!!! you killed me!?

oh no! oh no! aaagghhhh!



ummm this was interesting, im just hoping you werent talking about me... i like the bit about the goose and the moose! :)





A beautiful funeral doesn't guarantee Heaven.
— Haitian Proverb