Published March 15, 2007
For Shingi
Three edged word
A simple word
A single question
A thousand things unanswered.
I sit and think
I ask myself
Why you have to hurt her.
Is this for the future?
Is this an unmarked love?
Or do you really hate her,
Like your words and actions show?
“Useless child”
“Wretched girl”
Three edged words
They scar like hell.
A lonesome tear
A hidden pain.
A stab in the chest
A severed chain.
I sit, I watch
I hear, I feel.
The hurt you cause
May never heal.
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wow this was very good no it was better than good it was amazing.
but this line confused me some i had to read it a few times
but other tan that it was great so keep it up.