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Heart of Darkness Essay

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Europe Screws Everything Up

Authors utilize a variety of tools in order to drive their literatures plot. Of the variety of tools at their disposal authors often choose to use morally ambiguous characters; few authors, however, can effectively utilize this tool. Joseph Conrad, in Heart of Darkness, demonstrates that he is one of those few. Marlow, through his actions and experiences, shows himself to be morally ambiguous in that he goes on the European’s malevolent expedition to Africa yet he seems to despise the events he sees there and in that he performs both noble and ignoble deeds. These experiences and actions drive Conrad’s theme of European influence (colonialism) corrupting places, in this case, Africa.

Marlow is a sailor who, in this story, is traveling through Africa on a steam boat and who works for a company that is attempting to gain riches for Europe. His experiences in this journey help to drive the theme of Europe’s corrupting influence and his moral ambiguity is shown by the fact that he is participating in this heinous expedition yet, at the same time, he seems to despise it. Marlow, as he sailed along the coast, saw “a man-of-war anchored off the coast…shelling the bush…There was a touch of insanity in the proceeding… [which] was not dissipated by somebody on board assuring me earnestly there was a camp of natives – he called them enemies! – hidden out of sight somewhere.” (pg.18 ) Marlow’s word choice depicts the corrupting influence of Europe because it speaks of how he saw a man-of-war, a French ship, attack natives who were, in his opinion, unjustly called enemies. What truly shows this to be a corrupting influence, however, is his use of the word “insanity” to describe the event; insanity here is meant to show that this event, caused by Europeans, is unnatural to Africa and disrupts its calm. Next, Marlow spoke of other Europeans who came to Africa such as the “devoted band…called…the Eldorado Exploring Expedition…Their talk…was…of sordid buccaneers…there was not an atom of foresight or of serious intention in the whole batch of them, and they did not seem aware these things [were] wanted for the…world. To tear treasure out of the bowels of the land was their desire…with no…moral purpose at the back of it” (pg. 42). The Eldorado Expedition, as Marlow saw it, was the typical devoted European band which he felt was nothing but a bunch of dirty thieves -with no regard for the greater good- who, through their actions, would desecrate Africa by ripping away its riches. Finally, Marlow, as he was walking with Mr. Kurtz’s admirer, saw “heads on stakes…They showed that Mr. Kurtz lacked restraint in the gratification of his various lusts.” (pg. 81) Mr. Kurtz is a European who was sent by the company to get the treasures of Africa for Europe and to colonize it, but, when Marlow sees what Mr. Kurtz does he says that Mr. Kurtz is unable to restrain his lust. This, in and of itself, may seem unimportant, but, it infers that all the Europeans going to Africa are driven by lust and the main function of lust is traditionally corruption, hence, the Europeans going to Africa will do nothing but corrupt it.

In addition to utilizing Marlow’s experience, Joseph Conrad utilizes Marlow’s conflicting actions in order, not only to reinforce Marlow’s moral ambiguity, but to further depict the corrupting influence of Europe on Africa. The first thing the Conrad did was have Marlow take “the pose of a Buddha preaching in European clothes and without a lotus-flower” (pg. 8 ) Here Marlow acts like Buddha, a symbol of someone who is enlightened and good, which makes it clear that everything Marlow says is true and that his ultimate opinion, that being that Europe corrupts, is an absolute truth. Next Marlow empathetically said, “‘Nevertheless I think Mr. Kurtz is a remarkable man’” (pg. 88 ) Marlow here does something which appears to contrast with the perfection given to him by his earlier Buddha pose because he is supporting and admiring Mr. Kurtz, the person who took his lust to the extreme and the person who represents the ultimate level of European corruption. Marlow, however, must be right about Mr. Kurtz’s remarkable nature in some way because he is portrayed as Buddha though, contrary to what one might think at the beginning of the book, this portrayal does not portend moral perfection on Marlow’s part as shown later in the book. The only way in which Mr. Kurtz is remarkable is in his excessive level of lust; hence, Marlow’s statement implies that Europe is a ceaselessly corrupting influence, varying only in the degree of corruption from person to person. Finally, Marlow, when observing Mr. Kurtz’s wife, sees, “the faith that [is] in her…that great saving illusion [shining] with an unearthly glow in the…triumphant darkness” (pg 107). Marlow’s observation shows that in a world of corruption and darkness, the European world, Mr. Kurtz’s wife deludes herself by creating a world of light and good in her own mind, this fact is necessary in order to understand the importance of the exchange following this observation. The exchange between Marlow and Mr. Kurtz’s wife begins with Marlow unwisely saying, “I heard his very last words” (pg. 109) leading to Mr. Kurtz’s wife asking him to “‘Repeat them’…in a heart broken tone’” (pg. 109) and, although Mr. Kurtz’s true last words were “‘The horror! the horror!’” (pg. 109) Marlow told her that, “‘The last word he pronounced was – your name’” (pg. 109). The importance of this conversation is that it shows the reality of Mr. Kurtz’s vision, that being “the horror”, through Marlow’s noble lie. It was already shown that Mr. Kurtz’s wife lived in an illusionary world, this, combined with Marlow lying to her when she asked for Kurtz’s last words, shows that what Kurtz saw of Europe, a horror, was the truth. Conveniently, Marlow’s act of not shattering Mr. Kurtz’s wife’s illusion contrasts with his support of Kurtz, which caused him to seem vile, thus making it impossible to legitimately argue that Marlow is wholly good or bad, only that he is right.

Marlow, through his experiences and actions, is depicted as a moral ambiguity and this ambiguity is the tool with which Joseph Conrad develops his theme of European corruption on other peoples and places. Marlow participates in the heinous European expedition yet his opinion of the events he sees are negative thus demonstrating the corrupting influence of Europe, and his actions, which present him as both enlightened and morally ambiguous, also emphasizes the corrupting influence of Europe through the expression of his opinion. Ironically, his ambiguity is symbolic of the ambiguity of the Europeans themselves in that go to other places, such as Africa, with intentions akin to enlightening the people they encounter but, despite the fact that they may succeed in enlightening those people, they corrupt them as well.


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Thu Aug 09, 2007 7:15 pm
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AAAAH. Why is it that, out of all the people that I have talked to who read this book, only my English teacher and I actually like it!?




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Heart of Darkness? I'm... so sorry.




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Thu Aug 09, 2007 5:29 pm
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Thanks for the critiques. I'll try to use less big and/or unneccessary words next time I write and I'll try to make my topic more clear. Also, J., the essay topic wasn't really about any of those. We were just given a prompt that asked us to find a book in which the author used moral ambiguity to show his theme and then we had to identify the moral ambiguity he/she used and then show how this ambiguity portrayed the author's theme.




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Tue Aug 07, 2007 10:13 pm
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Hello order! This is my first critique of an essay, aside from my own essays for school, so bear with me! :wink:

Writing essays is about communicating. So you have to have a very clear idea of what you want to get across, and your writing also has to be easy to understand.

I think you could be MUCH clearer.

Narrow your topic. I can't tell if you're talking about 1. the author's potrayal of moral ambiguity 2. the moral ambiguity of Marlow 3. the use of Marlow as a symbol 4.the corruption and greed of the Europeans, or how "Europe Screws Everything Up" (lol) You've got good ideas, they just aren't organized logically. Right now all your topics are jumbled together like the ingredients in an oatmeal raison cookie. A little of this in this paragraph, plus a little of this...It might be better to pick one subject and focus on that.

Also, really be picky about textual evidence. Sometimes less is more. Choose only the parts that are immediately relevant and will best support your statement. For example, the whole quote about the Eldorado Exploring Expedition (you're not really writing about them exclusively, right?) could be narrowed down to "To tear treasure out of the bowels of the land...with no moral purpose at the back of it." I would suggest connecting your point with it, such as "Marlow witnessed with distaste other Europeans "...tear treasure out of the bowels of the land...with no...moral purpose at the back of it", although he himself engaged in similar activities. (pg. 42) ( which I'm only assuming; I haven't read the book)

Using less words makes it easier. Any "that being" or "in that" (in that third sentence, you let it go on forever!), can generally be cut, or substituted for something more descriptive.

Cut unnecessary details. I find it hard a lot to do this, especially if I love the book, but you've really got to stick to what's really supporting your argument. For example, do we really need to know that Marlow lied to Mr. Kurtz's wife about his last words(which was thoughtful of him), or do we only need to know his last words?

You might try one of those organizational tools, too, like a web or outline. Finding an overall theme statement, and confining your other topic sentences and paragraphs to it, then deciding on specific points of evidence, will help with organization, which means clarity! :D

I hope this made some sense, and I hope it helps! You obviously know the book well, and have a lot to say about it.

Good luck! :D

~Jacquie~




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*starts pulling out hair* aaaaaaaaaaaah! so many words! PLEASE space it out some more! Nice essay, but the words were so looooooooooooooooooooong. It brings the work to a screeching halt when I need to look up the word in the dictionary (ok, not that bad, but still.)

big words aren't a bad thing, but they need to be used in moderation.





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