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They say neat stuff.
But yeah; this was all surface fluff. There was no weight behind the words, if you know what I mean. On top of the the lacking substance, this was so cliché reading it was like experiencing Déjà Vu with line breaks.
Work on originality and the potency of your phrases. Remember--every word really does count.
~Ed
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