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Just something to keep in mind...we like to try to keep a 2:1 ratio on reviews to stories here and usually I want people to do this before I review their work but since this is a super special week, I'm letting it slide. (Just pinky promise you'll make some reviews!)
myturntobebrave wrote:I liked you. If I care to admit it, I still do. But, I'm not going to admit it. I'm not that clingy.
Great opening. It's interesting and it draws the reader in. Nice job.
I liked it. It was an interesting topic. Slightly repetitive and it kind of had the air of 'teenage girl writing a letter to herself in her room' in my opinion.
You did a good job of expressing her feelings and everything and overall I thought you did a nice job.
Gold star for you!
-Carly
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