I like the whole idea behind the poem......its so true that sometimes you wish to be the best of everything... and you want to improve so much that you forget your own flaws.....
but there is 1 thing that i felt was contradicting.....
Throughout the poem you imagine and narrate what you'd like to be and then you suddenly end up saying you want to be happy with what you are right now.....
The end that you've given to the poem is definitely magnificent but it seemed abrupt....
you could have explained why you don't want to change and become all that you stated and just continue being yourself.......
u know what i mean ???
otherwise it was a well composed poem and i enjoyed reading it.....
well done
Points: 890
Reviews: 10
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