Published June 22, 2007
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very hard hitting. I was shocked.
And your writing has improved like alainna said if you look at teh old Cubes stuff and the new cubes it is very better writing in the new stuff
Oh my. I kinda guessed that it wasn't his baby but I never thought that this would happen....
I couldn't find any mistakes...YAY...so more comments rather than crit.
I really love Ice Cubes and your actual writing has improved. I just hope that the story all ties together and winds up well. (Not necessarily happy, just good writing...)
Can't wait for more,
Alainna
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