Overall, it was pretty good, and broken-image had some good critiques. I just wanna add that "Is it life?" doesn't seem like the question that makes the most sense there. Perhaps "Is it right?" would make more sense. Or come up with your own alternative. But as is, the chorus is confusing. The idea behind the song is good, though. Keep it up!
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