JAMES' NOBLE VISION for KALINGA
melvin Banggollay
J-ustice, peace and equality for all
A-gricultural & industrial advancement
M-obilization and infrastructure dev't.
E-conomy, environment, employment & livelihood empowerment
S-ocial Services for all.
J-ames Bejarin, a name akin
to a newsboy I have seen
cleverness of mind and skin
yet gentle as the tamed wind.
A man of noble, great visions
for kalinga to be out of oblivion
from the quagmire of poverty
that one's shield his destiny.
Many may not have truly seen
his struggles that he had been
but this man behind the scene
is a humble man of self steem.
Ever ready to share his wisom
to lift those in great boredom
for he loved to help with freedom
those that lived in God's Kingdom.
Service to men, is his advocacy
to share his blessings and legacy
with prudent hands and industry
to lead us with honor and dignity.
Dedicated to James Bejarin, A young and humbe gentleman for his Candidacy for Congressman for the Lone District of the province of Kalinga for 2010 election.
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I thought this was a very creative way to express your admiration for this politician and would certainly be useful for his campaign!
I did not like the fact that you used his first name twice, and that you broke your pattern of starting every line with a letter of his name. While you did a beautiful job of describing his strengths, I would of liked it better if you had used his last name as well.
(Side note: Where is Kalinga? I've never heard of it.)