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This is a rather powerful poem, I must admit. I do not however understand the last line, "resorting to the floor". If I understand it correctly, the poem talks of a not-so-nice boyfriend, but why would he resort to the floor? I find it rather confusing.
I read this a few times and I absolutely love it.The length is perfect,it fits together like the pieces of a puzzle. This is very well written.