Heya manilla,
Shady here with a quick review for you this fine review day, courtesy of the blue team! Let's get started...
First of all, I think your format for this was really powerful, and really lent itself to the message. I'm a bit confused as to what the numbers themselves meant, but there was a clear progression to the message, and I think the bold text followed by some exposition of what that means under each one was just a really good stylistic choice to get your message across.
I'm not sure that I understand what the "framing love as greed was better" under 301-400 but that could just be a me-thing, just pointing it out in case it might not be clear to everyone and might be something you want to take another look at if you go through to edit this.
I'm honestly not sure what else to say, so sorry if this isn't the most helpful review ever. I mean clearly this isn't a poem -- but it almost seems closer to that than a short story? It's just a fascinating work with a fascinating format, but it is a really clear, succinct, to-the-point message and you did an excellent job with crafting it.
Keep writing!
~Shady
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