Hey
I really like the effect you incorporated into this piece! I would work on a few things:
- Skin Tone: I know that you are trying to give an effect of darkness, but the skin tone appears very gray which causes your character to loose liveliness. This could definitely be because you shaded with black- shading with pure black or very cool gray will cause the skin tone to look more dead.
-Shading: It's unclear where the lightsource is, the shading seems kind of ambiguous? Light seems to come from the front if you look at the neck, but the shading on the face alludes to light coming from both sides.
-Eyes: You put a lot of care into adding detail into the nose and mouth, but the eyes are more lackluster. I would add more shading to the whites of the eyes, and outline the iris is a darker green rather than a solid black.
The overall effect is really good! I might just be nitpicking at this point...
Good job
Points: 88
Reviews: 11
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