Published March 8, 2005
I thank those who drove me mad
and those who told me my happiness
would not be had
for you showed me
how to fight
and you showed me
that I must always question what is right
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the topic could be interesting but it's addressed too directly and without enough thought.
Too short, too pointless...too...bad.
The first sentence is not correct. Remove the "the" from it.
Generally, the rest was good, but it needs to be longer to really make any impact. It just seems cut off.
First of... too short... you need to lengthen it majorly...let's see if I can give you some suggestions...
Purposeful bad English? thy those??? Get rid of thy...
Maybe change it to was not to be had
I don't like the repetition...
The last line was just okay...you could do better.