I know you can't really see me but I'm still there
I've got an eye on you
don't know if you ever even set an eye on me once
you've been there for forever
but I only just realized it I must admit
now when will you notice me?
sorry, I am too embarrassed to talk to you
too embarrased to write this
I'll cross this out now...
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Hello Roxy here!
Some puntuation might help! A few commas here and there wouldnt do any harm!
I think you meant "write" instead of "right"
"sorry" should start with a capital letter
and one last thing- I think it would make more sense if you started the 3rd sentence with an "I"
Let me know if you've any Q's
--Roxy
Loved it! You score an A+
Thankeee!
Actually hi