Family Matters

My family matters to me
My mom, my dad
Who are forever there
as for siblings i have three 1,2,3

My family matters to me
Big or small i love them all
Although my sister drives me crazy
I love her dearly even then she`s lazy!

My bro is funny just like a monkey,
He even thinks he`s a little hunky ;)
he drives me up the wall
But i always love it when he will call

Well as for cats i have two
even more than you!

My eldest sis is a twilight freak
she makes us watch it at least twice a week

My family matters to me
why cant they see how much they mean to me?

I love my family with all my heart
I need them close to me forever
And can`t be kept apart
To protect me and keep me safe
To care for me and not make me late!

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lou5979 Comment

thanks for commenting so soon I know about my terrible typing skills, I`m really not good at it plus I usually use texting typing not using proper grammar

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Yanni1995
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This is a really humorous poem. I love that everything in this poem is pertaining for me. The meaning of this poem is really funny although I could find some grammatical errors.

My family matters to me
My mom, my dad
Who are forever there
as for siblings i have three 1,2,3 - this is a cute beginner.

My family matters to me
Big or small #BF0000 ">i love them all -I should be capitalized.
Although my sister drives me crazy
I love her dearly even then #FF0000 ">she`s lazy! - there doesn't need to be a space when you're putting an apostrophe
#FF0000 ">
M
bro is funny just like a monkey, I think you mean 'my' and not just 'm'
He even thinks #FF0000 ">hes a little hunky ;) - You need an apostrophe here. "he's"
he drives me up the wall
But #FF0000 ">i always love it when he will call you need to capitalize the I
- And I also absolutely love this stanza.
Well as for cats #FF0000 ">i have two
even more than you!

#FF0000 ">M eldest sis is a twilight freak - are you sure you want to put only 'm'?
she makes us watch it at least twice a week

My family matters to me
why cant they see how much they mean to me?

I love my family with all my heart
I need them close to me forever
And #FF0000 ">can`t be kept apart - no need for the space in between the apostrophe and the letters.
To protect me and keep me safe
To care for me and not make me late! - I love the last two lines.


I really really like this poem especially what it means. So, besides those that I pointed out I think you would be set. You really should be careful with the capitalization of the pronoun I. Happy writing!



I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom