JUST HOLD MY HAND
by lmpo
I didn't expect that it'll be like this
We are happy and we love in peace
But why do people judge us?
Saying that our relationship won't last
We both came from different paths
Me as a serious one, and you who
has playful act
Our fate meet our destiny
You've been a broken hearted
and I've been so happy in my way
But one day, we found ourselves
in each others arm
You promise to love me 'till
the end of time
You'll be with me though your
world may fall
I will be here and I'll give my all
But there are people who criticize us
Giving their best to destroy us
They don't believe to what we have
because it's my first time to love
They don't believe that this would work
because you've hurt in your past
for a long time
But we all know, life is never
an easy one
We will fight for our love as we
hold each others hand
We will stand to what we believe
And forever, together we will live.
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Good poem =] I like the determination, you tell the story of the difficulty of the relationship well. I found a couple of problems with your language:
it'll -> it'd
are -> our
doesn't really make sense. maybe it could be "and you who has a playful act."
meet -> meets
arm -> arms, others -> other's
they don't believe in what we have?