You wrote it whole heartedly. It gives me the feel how my life will be when me and my best friend will be parted. Because we are like the best buddies in the whole school and we can't hide anything from each other. The last stanzas are my favorite.
" I still love you
But I know its's not the same
It will never be the same"
I know it can't be the same if you are not together everyday and talking to each other everyday. It then became just a casual friendship. Hope me and my friend will never be parted.
And your poem is great. Its not formal that's why it conveys the exact feeling you feel. Looking forward to another relatable poem or story by you.
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