Published April 9, 2006
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I love this! I think it's the imagery that has me so fond of this poem -- "I trace the lines of your silhouette / And just like that, you’re gone." is probably my favorite part. I also enjoy the rhyme scheme it follows.
Great Poem! ^_^
I love this poem! I especially like the first and second verse's! Well Done!
yes, I loved the poem itself.... i'm a bit tired so I didn't understand some thigns but... yes... lol...
*Xanthan, nice signature*
The poem doesn't strike deep emotion in my heart, but I love the POEM, itself. I'm head over heels for the rhyming pattern and the rhythm (which is a bit off at times, but it works out).
I love this poem! Wow, the rhymes made me smile so much.
You've done a great job.
this is my favorite stanza.
I love how you repeated the first stanza at the end.