K, making it up as i go
Jimmi: Are we really gonna have this guy...
Leif: my name's Leif
Jimmi: ok, whatever, are we gonna have .... wait, your name is leaf?
Leif: no my name is Leif
Jimmi: that's what I said
Leif: no you spelled it with an A, it has an I in it
Proffesor: like Eye?
John: no proffessor, there's no I in Eye
Prof: well, why not?
John: ..... well.... obviously because..... hhhhhhhhmmmmm
Jimmi: because thats not the way its spelled
John: yeah, thats why
Jimmi: well as i was saying before, we're just gonna get some random guy to go and risk his life to save some random people that no one really cares about
John: yeah pretty much
Jimmi: .... this author is a complete dumbass
John: why do you keep bringing up this author?
Jimmi: never mind, lets just go, but this guy better be going somewhere with this dumbass story
John: i think you're dumber than the proffessor
Prof: im bringing my chicken patty
Everypne else: THAT'S A CATCUS!!!!!
Prof: I love you too
Jimmi: just kill me now
[2 Days Later]
John: hey guys check out this cool video, its called Red vs Blue
Jimmi: ok, you are a moron, for two reasons, one, because the autor made you that way...
John: stop talking about an author, whats so great about him anyway?
Jimmi: he controls our world
John: so make him destroy the dragon
Jimmi: i can't i'm not even supposed to know there's an author, but i do anyway
John.... what?
Jimmi: anyway, and two, because if you just started watching red vs blue, you are pathetic
Leif: didn't you guys need to go fight a dragon?
Jimmi: yeah, we do, because of our dumbass leader
John: shut up!
Jimmi: make me
Leif: stop it guys
Proffessor: It's peanut butter jelly time, peanut butter jelly time
Shyrl:....
[Shyrl sits there with a bored expression on her face]
In the backround: Shut up.... me... stop.... no.... bite.... my..... time..... jelly...... oh you had to bring my mom into this.... you guys.... peanut.....
Shyrl: OH MY GOODNESS!!!! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE, YOU ARE ALL A BUNCH OF COMPLETE FUCK-TARDS!!!!!
Jimmi: did Shyrl just...
John: talk?
Leif: is that not supposed to happen?
Proffessor: SSSSSSNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRT!!.. mmmmmm thats nice
Jimmi: that was weird...
John: not as weird as Shyrl talking
Shyrl:....
John: wich apparently is something we shall naver have the chance to hear again
Jimmi: i hate this story
Everyone else: SHUT UP ABOUT THE STORY!!!!!
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