Published September 16, 2011
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very nice
Wow.....
That was an EPIC beginning for a story!!!!
I sincerely enjoyed the way you portrayed the character.
As it was in a good and well constructed story, you made everything seem real!!!
I just love it to bits and i cant wait to read more!!!