Why am I still caught up in those times?
Why is your picture still reflecting in my eyes?
Why can’t I be happy?
Why do I have to live in misery?
I know I don’t have to
But you drove me to it.
Why can’t I get rid of your memory?
Why does this ghost keep haunting me…
This ghost of your past memory
I cry and I cry
Just to get some sleep
But even after
I still dream of you
I cried and still do
Just not in front of you
I cried and still cry just to take away the pain
To take away the misery
Well I guess what I am trying to say is
That I love you
And I just want to be with you
Just to be with you again
Would take away the pain
Take away the misery
Take away this ghost
This ghost of your past memory.
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same theme as last post? but much more profound. easier to read. a little bumby.
the piece in its entirety is uneven. Noticed "that ghost" became "this ghost" confusing. I tried to find the exchange, and couldn't.
Try to add spaces in between section of thought. make a verse here, or there.