To meet you was all but chance
and to think that
I used to dread,
That one last approaching dance
I have never met someone
as amazing as you
no one has ever made me feel
as beautiful as you do
Every time we talk I get nothing but surprise
to tell me you love me
and I can see
it in your eyes.
You’re my baby, my love,
My one special kiss,
The one that will always
Make my heart skip
I hope you love me
as much as you say you do,
and I hope you believe me
when I tell you I love you
This ring on my finger,
My devotion to you,
Saying to god, in front of family and friends
Those two words the ones saying “I Do” A
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Hey again!
Emotionally stunning! You're really deep, you should be writing romance novels! You should read that at their wedding I'm sure they'd love it.
Amazing done
Brown Eyed Girl xx
this is my favorite stanza in this poem. i like how you used a lot of different words for love and togetherness instead of saying them over and over. on your signature you said that most of your writing is about blood, death, destruction etc. you did really good on something that is about the completely opposite opposite thing