Published October 14, 2009
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Aw. Why deleted my dear? I'm sure it was great.
WOW! I'm not going to read this just yet, because at the moment, it's one big block of text, not really poem-y at all. When I first clicked on it, I thought it was prose!! Split it up into shorter lines, break it down more so people aren't so intimidated by it!
Then I'll review it.
Pgsgirl